Weekend Writing Warriors

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Begrüßung Stute und Fohlen Late for my first Weekend Writing Warriors. Humble apologies. http://www.wewriwa.com

A snippet from my as yet unpublished debut novel, “Torn”, my Irish Australian Colonial. Sailing to the other end of the earth, Mary and Liam are drawn together by concern for a horse…

“Mary barely moved except to snuggle closer to Bess. Liam, watching, felt jealousy rear its ugly head. Jealousy—of a horse? Surely that could not be! Yet his arms hungered for her warmth. He left the stall before his thoughts could run further amok. It was near enough to time for morning chores again and for once he was glad of it. There was nothing like shovelling fresh manure to lay such thoughts to rest.”

 

What I’m Reading: The Productive Writer by Sage Cohen

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“Writers make time for writing. And everyone does it her own way. Your job is to find your way.” Sage Cohen

Aint that the truth! I’m still finding my way. Last night I sat down to write my blog post and promptly fell asleep over the screen. Please forgive me. I didn’t get a post up. Obviously I have not yet found my “way”.

How does one find their way? By trial and error, suck it and see? Or, as my dear brother said, “If at first you don’t succeed, get a bigger hammer!” I need a bigger hammer!

How is it that just when we think we know ourselves, we fall off the edge and realise there is so much more we need to learn. So, where to from here? Back to the drawing board and try another way.

You guessed it, this weekend my task is to reset my schedule, reprioritize my goals and jump back on that horse. That’s my job.

Blue alarmer with a hammer on the white background.

Word of the Week: contiguous

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striped kittens sleeping together

Who are you contiguous with as you read this? A friend? A family member? A co-worker? A lover? More than one? Lucky you! It’s a nice place to be, close beside someone you care for.

I don’t remember where I first came across our lovely word, contiguous. I have a suspicion that I might have been reading the dictionary. What? Didn’t you ever read a dictionary? For fun? Me, strange? I don’t know about that… just because I read a dictionary? Sorry where was I? Yes, reading the dictionary. It just happened to be at the time when my Dear Husband and I were “courting”. Another old fashioned word.

According to the dictionary, contiguous means things like “near”, “touching”, “close proximity”. I fell in love with the word, even named a teddy bear my DH bought me “Con” for contiguous for hand holding and all those lovely new sensations.

The next time I came across my favourite word was in a completely different context. I was working for a veterinary pathology laboratory, typing along merrily when all of a sudden I was typing my favourite word, describing a tumour and it’s site.

So, what would you prefer to use? Near, tangential, adjacent, abutting, adjoining, juxtaposed, neighbouring or contiguous? It sounds so much better, don’t you agree?

Green

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IMG_1959I love green as all my friends and many acquaintances know. So much so that this picture shows part of a ‘basket of green’ wedding present!

How about you? What do you think of when someone says green? Glittering emeralds, lush foliage, butter soft moss, deep seas, cute frogs, velvet soft grass, crème de menthe, malachite, limes, asparagus, clover, the 40 shades of Ireland? So many greens, so little time.

What’s not to like about green? As always, there’s another side to the story. Envy, verdigris, naivety, green-around-the-gills nausea, often the colour of poison, that ‘science experiment’ in the fridge, green-eyed aliens…

So what’s the consensus? As with so much in life there are the good, the bad and indifferent. Few things are all good or all bad. It’s a matter of perspective, seeing things through the eyes of your past, your experiences.

Wow! Who knew there was so much to say about Green! And yet, I’m sure there is a lot more.

Welcome and an excerpt from Torn

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Peceful image of open book resting on a arm rest of a couch. Warm fireplace on background.

I’ve been staring at this blank page for a while now, wondering what to say. Ten poems in ten days but not all of my work is poetry. Apologies to those who may have got that impression. Yes, it’s time to step out from behind my poetry and say something. How about an excerpt from “Torn”? Would you like that? Yes. Okay. Here is a little from my hero’s introduction to Mary who is still recovering from near starvation…

“Is Mary sick again? Why were you carrying her, Uncle Liam? Did she fall?” Aiden asked in a loud whisper. His small hand reached toward the darkening bruises but stopped short of touching her otherwise deathly pale face.

“Shh, lad Miss Mary’s tired and needs to sleep,” said his nurse as she turned him and gave him a gentle push back to the nursery.

“Has the lass been seen by a doctor?” Liam asked.

“Yes, back in London Sir, but there’s little we can do. Poor lass, she tries but she eats no more than a bird. She’ll never be strong if she don’t eat,” the old woman muttered as she ushered Liam out of the room and closed the door behind him.

Reminding himself that the girl was nothing to him and he didn’t want that to change, he went about his business. But, the memory of her painfully thin frame and the soul deep sadness in her eyes haunted him.

Torn

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Torn is the title of my upcoming debut novel, an Irish/Australian colonial story.
Leaving Cork Harbour, the “Harbour of Tears”, bound for Moreton Bay in colonial Australia is one Mary Ellen.  Here for you is a little hint of her heartache.

Away from my homeland, from Erin’s green isle
I’ll mourn you my dear ones for yet a wee while
You sleep and you slumber in graves wide and deep
Together forever I trust in His keep
I swore on your deathbed I’d live to tell why
You sleep in that grave now while others pass by
Our crops, yes those praeties, were hit by the blight
With nought left to eat and no strength left to fight
I promised you, Ma, I’d go over the sea
Away to that land where e’en poor ones are free
We sail ever southward, across the wide world
My heart it is breaking, for freedom unfurled
There’s Michael and Patrick and Denis and John
We leave you behind as we sail ever on
My sweet Ma and dear Da I will love you for ever
I’ll remember your faces. Forget you? No never.

© Zoe Younger 2013

Wash Day Pink Reply

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In 2008 the North Pine Bush Poets hosted the Australian Bush Poets Association Championships. As a fundraiser we produced a book of members’ poems. I couldn’t resist writing a reply to “Wash Day Blues” by John ‘the Joker’ Pampling where he bemoaned having to hang the washing for his longsuffering wife.

I hope you enjoy

The Wash Day Pink Reply

So, you think it’s pretty funny when I ask you very nicely
would you kindly hang the washing just a little more precisely?
I can tell by how you wrote it just what jobs you do at home
and by seeing how you spoke it, that sarcastic little poem!

You think the wash’s only tangled up the day it’s yours to do?
The magic fairy sorts mine out?  Yeah right and pigs fly too!
And I know you never shook them out then hung them up to dry
the sleeves and legs are still all wet, jumbled up–that’s why!

You haven’t had to iron creased-up shirts when in a hurry
the creases look like they’re starched in–no wonder you get curry!
What do you care if blacks and blues are looking very pale
If you’d hung them inside out I wouldn’t buy more every sale!

You never folded washing when you had five minutes flat
which looks like dry used tissues from the pocket where you sat!
You never chased a stripy one to get a pair of folded socks
just to find it in the teatowels jumbled up in holey jocks!

You never faced the neighbours and those nasty little rumours
or the whispers up and down the street of raggy baggy bloomers
You love to make us sound much worse and I know you think it’s funny
but colour-coding pegs – not me you know that too well honey!

And by the way, you’d make my day if, when you cleared the line
you folded and you sorted it, put yours away and mine
you never know just what might come with rampant gratitude
and wash day might be much more fun with your new attitude!

© Zoe Younger 2008

A Furry Dilemma

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What the hell can I do? I am down, sad and blue
For I’ve just won first prize in a raffle
But the prize, wow surprise, it brings tears to mine eyes
and my poor heart, it’s all of a baffle.

I had taken a look at a CD and book
without glasses my vision was blurry
I could use me the mat, or the bat or the hat
but she’s little, she’s cute; and she’s furry

Now I don’t dare to take my prize past the gate
‘cause he’ll be there, he’ll meet me a howling
they’ll look at each other, then me as their mother
I guarantee she’ll start up yowling

My bulldog will shake, he will just salivate
for he’ll think that I’ve bought him a treat
He won’t see a pussy, cause he isn’t wussy
All he’ll see will be nice fresh meat

Could your interest be in a kitten for free?
there’s no way that I can just dump her
yet, I take her with me and one mouthful she’ll be
one day before she gets much plumper.

© Zoe Younger 2007

One Minute Cup Entry, North Pine Bush Poets Festival

Just Do the Best You Can

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Listening to the words you speak, hearing the break of your heart
Feeling so helpless and useless to fix anything for my part
I sit down to see if a new day can show me one thing I can do
To help you, to ease that there burden and show you how much I love you

But all I can do now is listen, the most I can do now is care
And let you know for now, as ever, for my friend I’ll always be there
I made up my mind many years ago, a decision that gives my heart rest
Whatever the worst situation, the most I can do is my best

I’ll research the best information, take as much time as I really can
Ask whomever I think just might help me, not rest until I understand
Take a deep breath and make my decision, plan and work then to make it succeed
Then at night when I sleep I’ll feel easy, know I did my best, word and deed.

Some days my best isn’t good enough, sometimes there is naught I can do
Some problems don’t have a solution and at times I do things that I rue
I’m human and that means imperfect and I make mistakes like the rest
Some days I’m down and need help too, those days I can just do my best

I trust though that you will forgive me on days when I let you down
Because you too are always forgiven when you are the one who’s the clown
For your problems I can’t know the answers I can listen and show how I care
You can count on my understanding – when you need I can hug like a bear

I can offer my ears and my heart and if there’s anything else I can do
You can count on me – I’m here to help you, to see that you always pull through
Some problems, alas, are your own though and some I must carry myself
We can listen and help one another but our best we must do by our self

No matter how much I would wish it I can’t make your cares go away
Your load you must bear for yourself dear, just do your best for today.

© Zoe Younger 2007

Inside

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What do you see when you sit down beside the woman who’s there next to you?
Do you see the clothing that’s tired and old, the hair that is grey, white or blue?
Look deeper, look down to the inside, past the layers she puts on each day
Look deep in her eyes ‘til you see to her soul, on the inside where she hides away

Stripped down to the bare essentials, to the person who lives in her heart
She is fragile she’s soft and she’s gentle, a lover of music and art
She’s a shy little girl from the country, plain and simple yet unashamed
She loves flowers and birds and bees, her animals free and untamed

She’s a poet, a greenie, a mother – she’s never been scared of hard work
She’ll get down and dirty like you do – the toughest of tasks she’ll not shirk
She’s gen’rous when anyone needs her, with her wisdom, her time or her ear
She’ll listen to you when you need to talk, she’ll tell you what you need to hear

She’s a lover of truth and of goodness, a champion of those down and out
She’s compassionate, kind, empathetic – a hero of mine there’s no doubt
‘Neath the costumes she wears on the outside, the faces she’d rather show you
She’s vulnerable unprotected, so sometimes she’s sad and she’s blue

She’s defenceless ‘gainst cunning and guile, innocent, naïve as a child
Too trusting and meek to be left alone in the city so evil and wild
When she sees all the fighting and warring that goes on around all the world
She longs for the peace and the quiet she knew back when she was a girl

For the long sunny days in the country, the creek where the wind used to blow
Thru her curls as she sat or she swung on a vine, time passed by her going slow
The clean fresh dry air of the outback, bearing wattle and gum blossom smells
When safety was walking in bushland, kicking dust up – the tales she tells

Of the pranks that they pulled, the wood that they chopped, the fire they set for the night
Of the tales, tall and true, the words that they knew of the songs and the poems learned just right
Of laughter that rang in the night time, the giggles she heard in return
For the simpler days of her childhood, for her family her heart it does burn

She’s naked under her clothes, you know, bare as the day she was born
But her skin’s not so soft or so clear now, in fact it is wrinkled and worn
 Don’t forget in the worry and haste of this world we now live in – she’s tried and she’s rue
The unvarnished truth, do you dare to admit she’s your mother, she’s me – is she you?

Zoe Younger © 2007